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AL13N There was a moment of silence, of them each watching the other before Catori cleared his throat, and Ezhno nodded, turning HIS head to gesture towards his traveling companion. => eir His brown eyes caught Catori's and held them for a brief moment, flickering over HIS body, hovering over the Bali medallion on HIS neck, and then lowered them. => eir and eir The mayor shifted FEAT. => feet It was then that Ezhno spoke, raising his voice over the masses. Catori's eyes caught onto him, and the creases in his face. HE wanted very much to wipe them all away. Ey
Posted at: 2008-07-30 15:20:06
Morgan Thanks for the compliments and the heads-up guys. I hope I caught all the pronoun errors, and I managed to fix the links. ^^
Posted at: 2008-07-23 02:03:38
Awna I've really enjoyed the story so far. This chapter has a lot of pronoun errors, though. Mostly using ey/eir for Ezhno.
Posted at: 2008-07-09 14:50:30
Joan of Arce Just a quick heads up. Chapter 6 and 7 are stuck on the same link. Other than that, Oh wow. this is getting heavy.
Posted at: 2008-07-07 07:56:32
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