Larkenia Prologue

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Kyttie this prologue makes me want to read more. :D Originally posted months ago at the old host.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:38:49

Stormy It's quiet, and raining, so I'm finally settling in to read this. This was an amazing first chapter, I love your voice, and there's something just...slow and otherworldly about this. Simply beautiful. Originally posted months ago at the old host.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:37:44

Donna Sirianni It's official. I'm a fangirl. Your writing is great. It's just so fluid and the premise of the entire story as, really, summed up here, makes for an excellent read. I can't wait to read further! Donna Sirianni - Fantastical Imagination Originally posted months ago at the old host.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:36:54

Lolita Jayne Well, finally got around to beginning Larkenia's flaws. ^^ I really love your style of writing, it moves very fluently. It was a very vague beginning, that's a good thing though I think. It leaves questions and curiousities for those who intend on reading further. I liked it. ^^ xxLola Originally posted months ago at the old host.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:35:02

Muse Of Monotony Great setup! Love how it's written in that old, mythological style. Originally posted months ago at the old host.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:34:15

Linda I want to like this story so much, but there are so many vague pronouns it makes it hard to understand! I had to read this chapter about three times to piece everything together, and I still don't know if I've got it right. "Their child had been beautiful" -- is that Thano and Lucya's? "Her offspring" -- Larkenia's? And in the same sentence, who is "it"? Lucya's offspring? At the very last sentence, "their child" -- is that Larkenia's child? And did she conceive using Thano? Or the "green ones", whatever those might be? On a different note, I think Larkenia "strung herself" means that she hung herself among the stars, right (cuz she's a goddess or something similar)? The way the sentence is structured, her death is not clear at all. Hmm. Will keep reading, though. Still curious. Originally posted months ago.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:32:52

lineses_groupie Alice forced me to read Larkenia's Flaws as soon as she got the book, of course only after she read it over at least five times and pointed at her dedication in the cover and jumped up and down like a little girl - which she doesn't do very often. It's really really awesome and I really enjoyed the first installment~ even though I don't generally like dark fiction. well... Yeah, that's about it... >.> <.< *SQUEEFLAILGLOMP* Originally posted on 7-02-2007
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:30:53

shane_mayhem Whoa! Harsh! Originally posted on 1-16-2007
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:29:26

pixiesdelight The title suddenly makes tremendous sense... Poor Larkenia, poor Larkenia's baby... Originally posted on 9-04-2006
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:28:31

to_conjure Goodness. I can't help but feel bad for Larkenia and her child, the child especially. Originally posted on 8-17-2006
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:27:23

hallwaydancer Poor Larkenia. -GC Originally posted on 8-16-2006
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:26:34

lilypeters Ooh, I like it! You have talent. ^_^ ~Lily~ Originally posted on 8-14-2006
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:25:02

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