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Stormy I like Daryene, not sure why, but I do. People actually complained about the accents? Done wrong they can be annoying, but in this they added something. No complaints here. Originally posted several months ago, on the old server.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:44:48
Donna This is just the first episode I've read and I can't wait to read more. I couldn't tell which section to start with since you have two up there that aren't headered (at least not on my computer, technology hates me so I wouldn't be surprised if there's a banner there and my work server is blocking it) so I just started at the top and I'll be working my way down. Great job! Donna Siranni - Fantastical Imagination Originally posted several months ago, on the old server.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:44:15
Windvein This is interesting. I'm going to keep reading. I just wanted to ask if you meant to use gaze and not glance in this sentence, "People barely spared the ebony-haired priest another gaze, turning instead to stumble after the ashen man." Originally posted several months ago, on the old server.
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:42:17
Muse Of Monotony The dialogue is much more readable, now. Great start, now keep going! *points finger of doom* Originally posted on 8-24-2006
Posted at: 2008-06-12 19:40:54
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